Monday, July 15, 2013

For Limited Time, ONLY 99cents!

Hidden Beneath will be coming out next month! So for any of you who haven't had a chance to read Into the Deep, you can pick it up now for only .99 cents until the end of July at Amazon, Barnes and Noble or Kobo. And, if you have read Into the Deep, please share this post and scroll down for teasers from Hidden Beneath.
 
5 Stars “Well-written and emotionally charged, I found this book to be a total gem.” – Jen Naumann, author of Shymers

5 Stars “This starts off as interesting, and gets more and more so.” – Lucinda Elliot, author of That Scoundrel Emile Dubois

4 Stars “…an interesting storyline, an original spin on the paranormal, and well-written.” – Jen Minkman author of Shadows of Time
About Into the Deep:
Ivy Daniels is a high school junior still learning who she is. After an accident, Ivy finds herself with an ability she doesn’t want, an ability to uncover secrets which quickly begins to redefine what she thinks about the people around her as well as herself. Because of this ability, Ivy becomes the one thing that stands between an angry teen and the death of every student on campus. The only problem is she doesn’t know who wants everyone dead. Will she figure out who has this dark secret, or will she fail to find him in time?

Through her search to do the right thing, Ivy discovers that knowing the thoughts and secrets of those around her may just tear her apart.
 
Get your copy:
 
Hidden Beneath Teasers:
1.
It wasn’t until I realized that I was walking in the direction of the gym that I stopped.
The lights above flickered, dark, then light, on and off as if they were beating along with some uneven tempo. One bulb on, another off, like some malfunctioning strobe light, they set the hallway in eerie moving shadows.
I took one step backward. Then I turned around and began to run back the way I came.  It was then that I ran into something, into someone.
2.
I sniffled and nodded. Then as he turned to walk off a sob broke free of my lips and it felt like my heart was breaking all over again as I watched him walk away. He was just going for a walk, I reminded myself, but it hurt so bad to know that I’d hurt him and felt unable to fix it.
3.
For a moment I didn’t breathe and I felt him freeze as well. In that moment we were both perfectly still, the only movement I felt between us was from the pounding of my heart. He was so close. Then I heard just a wisp of a thought enter his mind, like a distant echo caught in the wind.
Kiss her, he thought, and he took a deep breath.
 
 
 

 

Wednesday, July 10, 2013

10 Tips to Writing an Excellent Book Review

Reviewing books is a wonderful way to share your reading experience with others, but if you’ve ever read reviews to help you buy a book you’ll know some are more helpful than others. Here’s my advice to writing an excellent book review.

First I think reviewers should understand what the point of writing a review is. Amazon, B&N, Kobo, Goodreads, ect… allow readers to write reviews to help other readers decide whether or not they will like that book. Above all else your review should provide helpful information to other readers about the content and feel of the book.

Here are ten tips to being a good reviewer…

1. Finish the book – Many people write reviews for books they don’t finish reading. Personally I have a problem with this. Book ratings and reviews should be based on the entire book. Reading only part of a book and writing a review would be like watching only part of “It’s a Wonderful Life” and telling all your friends that it’s a horribly depressing movie. If you’re going to comment on a book, comment on the entire book. (And if you absolutely cannot make it to the end, at very least make it clear in beginning of your review that you did not finish reading.)

2. Don’t just give a summary – Readers can read the back blurb to know roughly what a book is about. Give information about the storyline but make sure you’re also sharing your opinion. Did you like the plot, characters, setting, writing style? Overall how did the book make you feel?

 3. Read other reviews – See how other people organize their thoughts to help you find your review writing style. What did they do that you liked, were they funny, straightforward, well-organized? And, what did they do that you didn’t like?

4. Use proper English – Write in full sentences and use real words. This is a book review, not a text message. Remember, you’re writing this for other readers to use as a source of information in their purchasing decision. If it’s not worth your time to write something legible, it’s simply not worth your time to write it. Spell-check and re-read your review before you post it.

5. Double check names – I see reviews all the time where the reviewer spelled the author’s name wrong, or a character’s name wrong, or even misspelled the title of the book. Spelling mistakes like this stand out, and can even be confusing to those reading your review. This can also be embarrassing, so do yourself a favor and take a few seconds to make sure you spelled all names correctly.

6. Explain what you liked AND what you didn’t – This may seem obvious, but often reviewers will only state one or the other. Sometimes they love a book so much they have nothing bad to say. And if you’re writing a review for your all-time favorite book you may not have anything negative to say, but for every other book other than that one - or those few - favorites, you will have things you liked and things you didn’t. If you give a book four stars tells us about all the good things about it, but then also tell us why it didn’t get five stars. On the flip side if you write a negative review, don’t forget to mention things you were happy about with the book just because your overall opinion of it was that you didn’t like it.

7. Be professional – As I mentioned above a review is for the next potential reader. It’s not a way for you to send the author a note, or to bash a piece of work. Just because you have a certain opinion about a book doesn’t mean other readers will agree with you. For example don’t say a book is terrible because it has a love triangle and you hate love triangles, and you think all books with love triangles are cliché and not worth reading. Say that that was something you didn’t like about the book and that love triangles aren’t your cup of tea, but be respectful of the fact that some people love love triangles. Even if you gave a book, say 2 stars because it had a love triangle, that may actually be a review that encourages someone who enjoys love triangles to buy it. (Check out The Positives about a Negative Review)

8. Take notes as you go – I read on my kindle and will often highlight and type a note in when I come across something I love, hate, don’t understand, ect…. If you read paperbacks maybe try buying post-it’s and writing yourself notes as you go. Once you’re done reading being able to go back and be reminded of those little moments that made you think, or favorite lines can help you write a more in-depth review.

9. Don’t spoil the story – Sometimes it’s impossible not to comment on a part of the story that happens to spoil, or give away, part of the plot. Sharing spoiling information is fine so long as you put a warning. Maybe try and save spoilers for the end of your review and clearly mark them so those who want to be surprised when reading can be. Goodreads lets you hide your spoilers behind a clickable link simply by putting these html tags around the spoiling information <spoiler> Spoiling info here </spoiler>.

10. Be honest! – No one really has a hard time being honest about a good review, but it can be hard to write bad reviews, and if you find yourself unable to write an honest review, don’t write one at all. Remember, reviews are to inform potential readers about a book. Reviews are not a place for you to rave about a friend’s novel to help them sell more copies. Support friends by giving them honest feedback to help them improve their skills.


Elementa1

Sunday, July 7, 2013

Help Make Morganville Vampires a Web-TV Series!

I recently read Glass Houses, the first book in the Morganville Vampires Series, and am now reading book two, The Dead Girls' Dance. I've found myself sucked into this series and wanted to take a moment to share with everyone about the Kickstarter Project to turn this wonderful series into a Web-TV Series.

Glass Houses is a  YA vampire novel that is nothing like the Twilight-esque romances we see so often. It has spunky, well rounded, and interesting characters; scary vampires, and a heroine that is brave as well as smart.

I'm now a fan of this series as well as a backer of this project on Kickstarter. You can find me listed on the Residents page of the Morganville Vampires Website. And you can become a backer yourself (and in turn receive some awesome prizes for your contribution) on their Kickstarter Page. Check it out ASAP! There are only 3 days left for this project to acquire the funds it needs.

I hope anyone out there who enjoys paranormal fiction will check out the Morganville Vampires series, and if you are able to, contribute to making this a Web-TV series. We're so close to our $75,000 goal, and it would be a shame for this to fall through.

Indie Book Goal 2018